rate my song/lyrics please(its my first)

[taylovato]

And fyi it is copyrighted
I hope you guys enjoy








Follow you heart (let it lead the way)



turn the light off
lets get this party crazy now (ohhh)
turn the beats up
lets get these people movin' (yeahhhh-a-a-aw)
lets start the party in this place
so turn up the beats and
get dancin' right now

So at the party now
It feels like everybody
Is watching you____
Sing your song like you just don't
Care now
(this is you chance to make it or break it)
This is your make or break

Let's a make an earthquake
tear the roof down
and speed it up a bit

[chorus]
You gotta believe in yourself
You gotta know you're gonna make it
There
You know the path
You better follow your heart
And lead the way(oh)
This is your chance to make or break

The whole worlds looking at you now
lets get this party on
so turn off the light
(Yeah)
so turn beat up
(Whooooa)
and speed it up a bit

lets a make an earthquake
tear the roof down
and speed it up a bit

so you said you'd never make it
now look you now
see where you've got in life
You better get ready for the
Time of your life
If you can dream it
You can make it there
You better get ready for it


[chorus]
You gotta believe in yourself
You gotta know you're gonna make it
There
You know the path
You better follow your heart
And lead the way(oh)
This is your chance to make or break


your a music maniac (yeah)
keep the music rockin'
like there's no stopping you
so turn up the be-e-e-eats
cause you're indestructib-b-ble(whooooa)
i'm tear it down (down down down)

You know what your heart wants
So You better let it lead you the way


the whole world looking at you now
(Whoooooooooaa)
you're indestrucib-b-b-ble

[chorus]
You gotta believe in yourself
You gotta know you're gonna make it
There
You know the path
You better follow your heart
And lead the way(oh)
This is your chance to make or break


(and shut it down)







Thank you

[Anngel]

Well...it is hard to say without the tune. But spelling the title right might be a start..assuming it is supposed to be follow your heart :)

[MyBlackHen]

I didnt, sorry, a tune would have helped.

[squarebear]

How do you claim you copyrighted it?
I'm guessing you are about 17 years old?

[EcclesCake]

Your lyrics seem to have been heavily influenced by other artists.

You can't copyright plagiarism.....

[Quizmonkey]

Dreadful! Clichéd, trite, meaningless. Try to say something original, not what thousands have been saying or decades. And this is NOT copyright!

[B00]

Surely without a tune to go with it, it's just a poem?

As far as music lyrics go, i've read worse- is there a tune to go with it then? If so, can we hear?