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Am I Using This Word Properly?
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The word PREEN, I know what it means and it does have different meanings.
I'm trying to use it in one of my poems.
'the first kiss preened from your lips,
revived this weary traveler'
Is this correct, does it make sense in this situation? Thanks for commenting
I'm trying to use it in one of my poems.
'the first kiss preened from your lips,
revived this weary traveler'
Is this correct, does it make sense in this situation? Thanks for commenting
Answers
I think your use of poetic licence in this case is brilliant - retain it.
12:18 Thu 21st Feb 2013
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I have only ever heard it as "birds preen"= clean their feathers.
Also leaning towards vanity "she preened at herself in front of the mirror"
I don`t know how it has anything to do with kisses and lips ( I understand what you mean by it)...but who knows,language and grammer is changing all the time.
Also leaning towards vanity "she preened at herself in front of the mirror"
I don`t know how it has anything to do with kisses and lips ( I understand what you mean by it)...but who knows,language and grammer is changing all the time.
It seems to me you are saying in the poem that someone preened a kiss from someone else's lips, so I suppose that if you are thinking of what a bird does to itself when preening, ie pecking itself etc, then I suppose you could use it in the sense that one person is using a preening action on another instead of themselves.
Probably not is the short answer. However, as it says in 'Alice in Wonderland' (or 'Through the Looking Glass) words can mean what you ant them to mean. If you are writing for an audience, it is sometimes wise to make sure your meaning is accessible to them - but if you are not sure yourself, they can interpret it how they like, I guess.