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nommy | 17:21 Thu 19th Apr 2007 | Arts & Literature
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I am deliberately putting this question in Body and Soul, in order to get a good response from the many people who come here.please don't lambast me for doing that
Can you please help me with some experimental verse,and Iam not looking for great writers or poets just ordinary people, what I need is for you to add a sentence to the one I give, it must be in context to the sentence before yours, but it can be surreal, nonsense or humorous, or simply something serious, please do not put any other words except your sentence and dont worry about the stance or rythym, and it can rhyme but is not vital. Many thanks for your participation

I lay awake with the idea circling my thoughts, paying no heed to time
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trying to think of another line and trying to think of one to rhyme
My thoughts were broken by this ringing sound
was it next doors alarm or mine.
it was my alarm and my sense of time
the ticking clock provides the beat, my heart supplies the rhyme
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Should I ignore her, should I call her, or maybe drop her a line.
What made me feel so ill today, was it the lager and lime
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I'm waiting for a sign to say she will be mine.
wishing i'd done my homework sooner, but i can always copy and past thine
And you're inviting detention for your scurrilous crime
one more word of this nonsence and I am gonna whine.
i have got to stop this i must not pine
for sunrises in the past, I should be greatful for the happiness I have
playing with my boyfriends manhood, because i really do miss mine.
It's removal with a knife made me feel jolly fine
i wish i had a man to take me out to whine and dine!
i,m sure her stubble is a real certain sign!
but her kiss, her touch, sublime
time to heed no paying, thoughts my circling idea the with awake lay I.

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