ChatterBank2 mins ago
Your thoughts on my poem
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In the midst of the stars
In the midst of the earth
And the mass of beings within it
The significance of one is minor in comparison
We are all, however, as an individual and as one
Know that you are unique
To be distinguished you needn't be outstanding or stand out
For to be just yourself,
That is the most beautiful thing one could see.
Know that you are a one in a million.
Just a poem I wrote in the spur of the moment - does need some refining. Its for a girl and I want to keep it subtle (slightly).
In the midst of the earth
And the mass of beings within it
The significance of one is minor in comparison
We are all, however, as an individual and as one
Know that you are unique
To be distinguished you needn't be outstanding or stand out
For to be just yourself,
That is the most beautiful thing one could see.
Know that you are a one in a million.
Just a poem I wrote in the spur of the moment - does need some refining. Its for a girl and I want to keep it subtle (slightly).
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