Help Me Write A Song!!

[Meggyw]

I want to write a song about a boybestfriend
I don't wanna loose him
He's gorgeous in every single way
He's always there for me
But I think we're drifting apart
Please help me write a song about him, I do write quite a few songs and I sing them to the school:) but I need help on this one

[dannyk13]

I think you would get a better response if you posted this in Music.

[Canary42]

Face the fact - you're drifting apart, any attempt to stem the drift will only postpone and exacerbate the agony. That's Life.

[mallyh]

i think we are drifting apart
if we do it'll break my heart
you've been my best friend for so long
please listen to my song
you're gorgeous in every way
you help me get through the day .......as you can see i'm no lennon and mccartney lol
but it might give you a laugh and cheer you up x

[Butterbun]

That's ok mallyh, I've heard songs from 'singers' that have one or maybe two lines repeated over and over again. Yours is a complete verse.