How Does My Ebay Ad Sound

[computer14]

I have an ibook g3 that is in working condition and includes two charger osx tiger cds and battery (it needs replacing) but works fine plug in.
and the ibook g3!
Here is what the ibook g3 is about..

Machine Name: iBook Machine Model: PowerBook4,3 CPU Type: PowerPC 750 (2.2) Number Of CPUs: 1 CPU Speed: 800 MHz L2 Cache (per CPU): 512 KB Memory: 256 MB Bus Speed: 100 MHz Boot ROM Version: 4.6.4f1 Serial Number: UV323494PET

It comes with osx tiger and has a cd drive
i(t can't run anything after osx tiger)
where the battery holds in there is missing a screw but i have duct tape holding it in This item is used but stills works good.
and the problem that it had before was when i put it in sleepmode when plug in it would wake up by itself and when i open the lid it would take a few secs to go back to sleep by itself. this no longer does it last time i check but it may do it again. and the battery is okay but works best plug in. it will go to 0% around 75% or 70% thanks for looking!! But the ibook g3 works now!!! it will be great for basics like email web and word. Buy my ibook g3 and save yourself 999 dollars from apple. apple no longer makes these but this is still a great little computer for the basics. This computer is not the fastest but it will do for the basics!! thanks for looking Happy bidding!
i am kind of new to ebay

[computer14]

anybody?

[gsr600]

you are in the USA & asked the same sort of question before.
This is a UK mainly site & probably won't be bidding on your stuff.
sorry if I sound offish.

[bednobs]

sorry but you ad sounds utterly stupid and i can't imagine anyone buying it. However, as the majority of people are also stupid, you may be in luck

[computer14]

how can make it better then

[bednobs]

is that ^^^^ what you actually have put in your ad? for something you are expecting someone to buy????

[woofgang]

you have been told loads on the other thread about how to improve your ebay ads.Not selling tat would help too.

[chrisgel]

Reduce it by about 15 lines. Nobody wants to read your personal history of problems with the thing.
//and the problem that it had before was when i put it in sleepmode when plug in it would wake up by itself and when i open the lid it //

All people will be interested in are the specs. is it working? Any major problems such as the battery you mentioned. And a few photos.

[Tilly2]

I think computer14 is hoping to sell the tat through this site. Any takers?

[computer14]

okay it did have that problem i just put it in there for just in case it happens again and i can't buy a new digal cameral at the moment but hope later on

[Mass_Hysteria]

Would YOU buy it after reading about all the problems it has?

It's broken (duct tape)!

Sell it without all the blurb as "For spares or Repair" Cheap!

[Prudie]

Wasn't it you that posted about the Christmas town yesterday? If so I'd just sent you some constructive criticism about your updated photo and the thread was removed. Do you know why? Anyway the problem was your pictures were very out of focus so check that out. If it wasn't you ignore me.

[computer14]

then how much should i sell it for then

[computer14]

Hi it was me just send me a ebay message then i will try to fix the pics as best i can. and i don't know why it got removed for. i will do the pics when i get home or tomrrow

[carrust]

I got bored after reading the 1st line of the ad.....

[Mass_Hysteria]

Price?
Have a look on here and compare your ibook with these and come up with a suitable price. Not much as yours is not exactly in top condition.

http://www.ebay.com/sch/i.html?_trksid=p2053587.m570.l1311.R1.TR9.TRC1.A0.Xibook+g3&_nkw=ibook+g3&;_sacat=0&_from=R40

[sherrardk]

How about 'Sugar computer for sale, mug wanted to buy it'?

[Twenty20]

Why do you keep posting these silly questions?

[factor-fiction]

I recall that detour1 is a school/college student in the US with some learning difficulties and is looking to raise some money, Twenty20.

[Tilly2]

I remember that factor. Was it the social stories one?

[Sharingan]

Hi Computer 14 try something a little bit simpler maybe like this.

Machine name part etc is fine, so leave the spec upit's good for peole to know exactly what they are buying.

Then put something like this.

G3 i book for sale, in good working order. As an older machine it has a few niggles like there is a screw missing by the battery placement and it's occcasionally a little quirky in sleep mode. Battery is holding charge to about 75% but as it's an older machine works best plugged in. If you want a basic machine for web and email then it's perfect.
Please message me with any questions.


Hope you sell it okay. xx