Please Help Me To Correct The Paragraph In English?

[lenanils]

Hi, My Name is Lena Nils, I’m a new immigrant to Canada. I have trouble in speaking and understanding English. But I try my level best to learn English. I always make lot of mistakes while speaking or texting. So I thought to depend yahoo answers to learn English and correct my mistakes. Now I want to post few sentences could anybody correct that sentences and rewrite it in proper English. The sentences are


“I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel. You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post”

Friends, please correct this sentences for me

[Zacs-Master]

As you are new in the city and might not have proof of address, which is required by the Canadian postal system, I decided to send the book to Krista's.

[Old_Geezer]

Your sentence makes sense even if it reads a little awkward. I think Zacs has a good alternative. Parts have been repositioned into an order that seems to be that expected.

[Zacs-Master]

And is far more concise.