Email For Office

[fatema]

Hi Everyone, please tell me what is the best way to send an email to an office employee regarding his weekly attendance.

Hi xyz,
the following is your attendance status for sep 26 to sep 30th . if there is any question do write me back

regards

xyz

[Prudie]

The following (or attached) is your attendance record for Sep 26 to Sep 30th . if there are any queries please let me know.

[Tilly2]

26/9/16 - 30/9/16.

If there are any queries, please let me know as soon as possible.

[Old_Geezer]

http://www.theanswerbank.co.uk/Jobs-and-Education/Question1511250.html

[Peter Pedant]

I have to say this sounds like course work

Hi goes to Dear
dates have a year in it
capitalise The and If
pluralise question
put in comma
change to 'do write back to me'/ "please email me"

and hey we are almost up to EIGHT changes

[Old_Geezer]

Ah I see there is a difference between the two questions after all.

Hi xyz,

Please find below your attendance record for the Sep 26 to Sep 30th. If there are any questions let me know as soon as possible.

abc


I rarely put "Dear" in an internal e-mail. I see that as being more suitable for e-mails to external companies.

[Old_Geezer]

And, of course, "there are many ways to skin a cat".