Help In English Please

[fatema]

Hello, I need someone to proofread this email. I have to send this email to few Facebook pages for promotion of my website (My company has a news website and they want to advertise their articles/news on Facebook pages). Thank you in advance.
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I came across your page (facebook page) and I found it very useful and informative. I’m very much interested in promoting my website on your page. I would like to know what the best way would be to promote my website or where I should contact for my website promotion.
I am looking forward to your response.
Thank you,
Abc

[bookbinder]

I came across your Facebook page, and I found it very useful and informative. I'm very interested in promoting my website on your page, so I should be pleased if you could let me know of the best way to promote my website, or if you could tell me whom to contact for my website promotion. I look forward to your response.
ABC

[Note: do not say Thank you if you have not received anything. It makes you appear to be humble and obsequious, which I am sure you are not.]