Help In English Please

[fatema]

Hello! Can someone proofread my email? Thank you in advance.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm writing to ask for your help in finding accommodation in Siegen, Germany.
My name is --- and I'm 28 years old. Recently I got admission in abc university and I'm planning to come there at the end of September. Most probably I will check-in on 1st october.

My plan is to find rented accommodation for at least two years of my stay in Siegen. Ideally, I would like to prefer one hostel room or one-room apartment (not shared) near to university with an easy commuting distance of the university.

I hope you will help me with my accommodation search, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,
ABC

[waterboatman]

That looks OK.

[Jackdaw33]

would like to prefer

Either I would like or I would prefer

with an easy commuting distance of the university.

within commuting distance of the university

[Mozz71]

Yup, pretty good. If you go with Jackdaw's amendments, it'll be perfect. Good luck.

[bednobs]

wouldn't it be better to send it in German (assuming you are asking someone German)

[fatema]

Thank you everyone!