Hello, everyone, I hope you are all doing well. can someone proofread my Facebook post caption? Actually my company has Facebook live sessions with three universities in the month of August. and I want to share the schedule of live sessions with my audience.
so here is my post caption:
"Abc company presents yet another month of exciting Facebook live sessions with university1, university, and university3. If you have any questions regarding scholarships, courses, and visa-related matters, you can directly ask the experts. "
Thats pretty much perfect....two tiny things to change if I may suggest? To me "yet another" implies "oh no not again" so I would take out the "yet"
The other is simply a word order thing. I would change "directly ask the experts" to "ask the experts directly"
yes it's fine . but in case you want to change it you can write it as follows-
'abc company brings on another ____uni3. for your any kind of queries regarding scholarships, courses, and visa related matters attend the sessions and get your question answered directly from the experts.'