Good 'last line'

[wheaten]

Hi, I'm looking for a good 'oomph' last line for my 'Tell us about yourself' bit on a job application. I have already detailed work qualifications etc, how I am friendly and presentable and get on well with all ages etc. The job is in an 'older' person's clothes shop which mainly gets passing holiday trade. Any idea how I can end on the 'wow, we want her to work for us'? Has anything worked for you? Any ideas gratefully received. Thank you. Wheaten

[joko]

perhaps mention a personal achievement? proudest moment

[wheaten]

Thanks Joko, don't have many of those that I can think of though! Never done any charity work or saved anyones life, will have to wrack my brains on that one!