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Hi i came across the question with a friend and we were a little stumped as to what should be amended in this story. Was wondering if anyone could help?
Here is the story:
Knife-man "mentally ill"
A man was brandishing a ten inch carving knife because he believed people were after him, magistrates heard yesterday.
A police officer saw Davy Jones, of Leek, trying to cross the High Street and waving the knife at passing motorists, said Andrew Meerbrook, prosecuting.
Defending, Mary Baslow told the court her client was "scared out of his wits" because neighbours were "out to get him" after he held a noisy late-night firework party at his house.
The magistrate, who cannot be named, told Meerbrook he was a "menace to society" and committed him for trial at county court.
The court heard health officials were concerned about his mental state and bail was refused.
Here is the story:
Knife-man "mentally ill"
A man was brandishing a ten inch carving knife because he believed people were after him, magistrates heard yesterday.
A police officer saw Davy Jones, of Leek, trying to cross the High Street and waving the knife at passing motorists, said Andrew Meerbrook, prosecuting.
Defending, Mary Baslow told the court her client was "scared out of his wits" because neighbours were "out to get him" after he held a noisy late-night firework party at his house.
The magistrate, who cannot be named, told Meerbrook he was a "menace to society" and committed him for trial at county court.
The court heard health officials were concerned about his mental state and bail was refused.
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well i think that the comments made the defending solicitor should be taking out as they are not common ground factors, as there is no proof of it.
would i be right in saying that the sentencing saying he was waving the knife at passing motorists should be taken out as that is the opinion of the police officer?
also the comment by the magistrate should be taken out
is there anything else?
would be a real help
would i be right in saying that the sentencing saying he was waving the knife at passing motorists should be taken out as that is the opinion of the police officer?
also the comment by the magistrate should be taken out
is there anything else?
would be a real help
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