Would Soneone Like To Correct These Two Pieces Of Text For Me, Please?

[Nove]

As a child I was ofeten overweight, I didn't like being overweight at all, sometimes I almost felt like it was a tragedy.
Growing up I started eating less, so I lost weight. Sometimes teens really don't like their body, but I used to think I was a VERY attractive girl at the time. Now I'm 28 and I don't think i'm that pretty anymore, and not just me, but also the women I used to think were very goodlooking women, I now think they are quite average.
I wish I could lose some weight, at least 10 kilos. losing weight is soooo hard.

I like my house, it's not a particulary noisy place, sometimes you hear dogs barking but it's quite for most of the time. I used to like it more as a child because there were less houses nearby. I live on a hill and here I can see the castle. As a kid I didn't like old things, like castles, but growing up I appreciate more those type of ancient things.
If I had the possibility to choose, I would probably move into a place that's even more quite, with a lot of nature and also up on a hill but higher compare to where I live now. I like that i have to climb a lot to go to my house.

[bookbinder]

I was often overweight when I was a child, but I did not at all like being overweight. Sometimes, I came close to feeling that it was a tragedy. I began to eat less when I was growing up, and so I lost weight. Teenagers sometimes really dislike their body, but, at the time, I thought that I was a VERY attractive girl. Now, I am 28, and I do not think that I am so pretty. It is not just me that I am thinking of, but it is also the women who I used to regard as being very good-looking. I now think that they are quite average. I wish that I could lose some weight, at least ten kilos, but losing weight is so very difficult.

I like my house. It is not a particularly noisy place, and sometimes you hear dogs barking, but it is quiet for most of the time. I used to like it more when I was a child, because there were fewer houses nearby. I live on a hill, and from here I can see the castle. I did not like old things, such as castles, when I was a child, but, when I was growing up, I came to appreciate that type of ancient thing more and more. If I had the opportunity to choose, I should probably move to somewhere that is even quieter, in a natural environment, and also up on a hill, but even higher, compared to where I now live. I like having to climb a lot to get to my house.