im roughly working on this song just now thought id share

[lauratwentyeight]

its so so rough but just wanted to know if u think its worth working on further? dont want to waste my time comming up with rubbish lol!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5W1JJ3EtoX8

[erin-x]

Very good!! I always look forward to your videos :)

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks very much for listening Erin x

[MarkRae]

Is that one of your own songs, Laura?

[lauratwentyeight]

yeah mark its one im working on writing just now, im going to get a friend to play the guitar properly for it once im finished putting it together

[erin-x]

Would you post the finished piece? It really is lovely!

[ELVIS68]

Sounded a bit like Sixpence None The Richer, Kiss Me

Plus you looked bored singing it, nice song though

[lauratwentyeight]

im going to remove it i just wanted a wee bit of feedback before working on it, yeah Erin i will post the song once its finished thanks for listening means alot! elvis68 i wasent bored i was just struggling with the guitar and singing at the same time lol x

[MarkRae]

I thought so. You really should give up doing covers - you sing your own stuff so much better...

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks mark, thats what i would like to start doing im hoping i can do it! now and then there might be a song i really love and want to cover and i will but im not going to aim for that all the time anymore i really feel ready to try my own stuff now x

[lauratwentyeight]

thanks headwreck, yeah it just needs stiched together and played properly lol! im looking forward to working on it and finishing it :)

[MarkRae]

You're not going to use the "guitarist" in one of the videos you posted recently, though, are you...?

[ELVIS68]

Any chance of you doing a cover of Kiss Me, would like to hear it.

Btw your guitar playing is ok

[boxtops]

Is there another link, Laura? The link now says "this video has been removed by the user"

[dotty.]

I think I've heard that before, isn't it a Catherine Harry song?

[lauratwentyeight]

no mark a diffrent guitarist this time, elvis68 i maybe try it one day il try it again as ive tried it before and wasent really up to much lol! boxtops! oh sorry i removed it deleted it! but il be posting it again one day when its finished! sorry x

[boxtops]

OK I'll wait!

[lauratwentyeight]

whos catherine harry lol? nope i wrote this song and composed the shaking tune all by myself lol :)