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Night Poem From Khandro ( Sat.)

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Khandro | 22:48 Sat 19th Dec 2020 | ChatterBank
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A Musician's Wife

Between the visits to the shock ward
The doctors used to let you play
On the old upright Baldwin
Donated by a former patient
Who is said to be quite stable now.

And all day long you played Chopin,
Badly and hauntingly, when you weren't
Screaming on the porch that looked
Like an enormous birdcage. Or sat
In your room and stared out at the sky.

You never looked at me at all.
I used to walk down to where the bus stopped
Over the hill where the eucalyptus trees
Moved in the fog, and stared down
At the lights coming on, in the white rooms.

And always, when I came back to my sister's
I used to get out the records you made
The year before all your terrible trouble,
The records the critics praised and nobody bought
That are almost worn out now.

Now, sometimes I wake in the night
And hear the sound of dead leaves
against the shutters. And then a distant
Music starts, a music out of an abyss,
And it is dawn before I sleep again.




Weldon Kees
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In what way is this a poem? It's just prose chopped up into short lines and arranged to look like verses. As Robert Frost (you should post one of his ) said of this sort of thing: "like playing tennis with no net".
Reluctantly I have to agree.
Weldon Kees
1914-1955
Keep posting your poetry Khandro, it is read.
I love this ..
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brainac; Sometimes it's better to remain silent and be thought a fool than to speak and to remove all doubt.


Abraham Lincoln.
Weldon Kees saw the world clearly, and didn't like what he saw.

This poem moves me to tears of sadness.
Who cares what it is, it's beautiful! Why do some people always have to be so negative??

Keep them coming Khandro.
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eleanor; That is beautifully spoken by David Bailie - terrific, moving timing, what a voice (Stockport born - hooray!) & a face that has seen a thing or two.
This is poetry (even though it doesn’t rhyme) because it encapsulates an idea in lyrical language. It’s very moving though.
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margaret; // It’s very moving though.//

Yes it is and particularly when looked at in relation to his life and of whom he writes in this poem.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Weldon_Kees
I thought of David Helfgott when I read it.
Not that I'm riding piggyback on a great thread about an incredible poem, but if you want some very good cheer to counteract his sad (but accurate) world view, go and look at the picture in this thread:

https://www.theanswerbank.co.uk/Animals-and-Nature/Question1732796.html

Now that should make your tears stop for a while.

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I saw that when you posted it. Great pic.
Margaret: also proving your point. Not everything has to rhyme to make it moving.

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