Can Someone Check For Grammar/mechanical/spelling Errors Etc....?

[Imacooltoon3322]

The night before I had to attend the interview, I worked on my essay I had to submit to them. I made my uncle to help me to make sure that the was correct. My uncle also taught me appropriate ways to behave during the Interview. I felt very confident and firm that I wasn't going to do badly. When the Interview started, I acted professionally and I talked about my life, my career path, and all sorts of things. The Interview never lasted long and I felt very confident that they might consider me into the program. After a while I've waited a long time in school hoping that I would get any Information regarding if I was accepted or not. I spoken to my college consular about the issue and he told me “I’m afraid it’s not happening” Twenty people has been accepted to the program, but only two people has been rejected and I was considered one of them. That day I felt embarrassed.

[woofgang]

Sorry I don't understand your question?

[factor-fiction]

Type Your Answer Here...It's a duplicated question. Maybe this thread should be removed as a duplicate.
There are some answers on the other thread. The OP just wants advice on English in the story/piece she/he has written. (We think English is not the first language)

[factor-fiction]

http://www.theanswerbank.co.uk/Jobs-and-Education/Question1306866.html
This thread

[factor-fiction]

(Woohoo- I've never managed to replicate that 'type your answer here' problem before. I wonder how I did it.)

[woofgang]

oh ok....