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Please Help Me To Correct The Paragraph In English?

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lenanils | 04:01 Wed 24th Sep 2014 | Jobs & Education
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Hi, My Name is Lena Nils, I’m a new immigrant to Canada. I have trouble in speaking and understanding English. But I try my level best to learn English. I always make lot of mistakes while speaking or texting. So I thought to depend yahoo answers to learn English and correct my mistakes. Now I want to post few sentences could anybody correct that sentences and rewrite it in proper English. The sentences are


“I thought to send the book to Krista’s Address, because I think an address proof has to present in the Canada post to receive the parcel. You are new in that city so I guessed you might not have an address proof to present in the Canada post”

Friends, please correct this sentences for me
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As you are new in the city and might not have proof of address, which is required by the Canadian postal system, I decided to send the book to Krista's.
06:21 Wed 24th Sep 2014
As you are new in the city and might not have proof of address, which is required by the Canadian postal system, I decided to send the book to Krista's.
Your sentence makes sense even if it reads a little awkward. I think Zacs has a good alternative. Parts have been repositioned into an order that seems to be that expected.
And is far more concise.

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