Can Someone Help In English?

[fatema]

Hello again!
It's me with the same problem :)
Can someone correct this for me? My company has a team, who translate website pages in different languages, recently we have translated someone website in Arabic, now we are interested to translate one more page of his website in Arabic, so I need to write him an email what should I write?

What I wrote:

Hope you are doing well. Our translation team is really enjoying to read about Jos(A person biography), so that's why we have selected one more page of your website for translation into Arabic. but we would need your permission to do so. Please let me know if you would be willing to allow us to translate your page.

[scorpiojo]

I hope you are well.

Our translation team are really enjoying reading about Jos A, and, with your permission, would like to translate one more page on your website into Arabic.

Please let us know if we have your permission to do so.

Kind regards

[Maydup]

Nearly there.

Hope you are doing well. Our translation team are really enjoying reading about Jos(A person biography), and that's why we have selected one more page of your website for translation into Arabic. We would need your permission to do so, of course: please let me know if you would be willing to allow us to translate your page.

[jamessweney]

Yes, I think it is worth writing with the corrections that the scorpion indicated, I think this is the correct form of the letter.

[spathiphyllum]

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Our translation team is currently enjoying reading about Jos, so we have selected one or more of your webpages to translate into Arabic. However, we need your permission to do so. Please let me know if you'd be willing to allow us to do this. Thank you.

[murraymints]

Hope you are doing well. our translation team is really enjoying reading (person) biography, subsequently we have selected a further page from your website for translation, with your permission, into Arabic. Please advise if you are happy for us to do so.

[ladybirder]

Go with Scorpiojo.

[Alonelywriter]

Hello, I hope you are doing well. Our translation team is currently enjoying reading about Jos, so we have selected one or more of your webpages to translate into Arabic. However, we need your permission to do so. Please let me know if you'd be willing to allow us to do this. Thank you.