Proofread My Report

[Fatemah]

Hi everyone, I'm posting after a long time and I hope everyone is fine. I am fine but trying to adjust with Germany's cold weather. My studies are going good so far but I was failed in one course and for one course I did not get a good feedback from my professor so I am little bit upset, but I hope things will better soon and I'm also planning to visit my family in April because now I am missing them badly. I am learning German also, because of language barrier sometimes it is quite difficult to communicate with people and also I am trying to improve my English.

I was so busy with studies so I could not get a chance to travel somewhere outside of the Germany except Amsterdam, its so beautiful city, but within Germany I have travelled few cities and I like Frankfurt and Düsseldorf a lot, both cities are so beautiful, it gives you real vibes of Europe and both cities have nice weather not so cold.

So today I have one request, if someone can proofread my internship report. I would be so grateful. I have shared the document link below, I can't share my report here because If I will share here maybe it will save somewhere in search engine and professor will think I have copied this. Thank you very much in advance and have a nice day.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VPMjPhFk2YTpxduyDXmDF3b7xgvK5hI8H8uEHsXnr2Q/edit?usp=sharing

[bednobs]

fatemah,it's lovely to hear from you. did you know people can alter your report? peraps that's how it's supposed to be? I hope you also have it saved elsewhere

[bednobs]

your dates look a bit sus to me - you passed the test in may 22, but then went for an interiew in may2018? and worked for them between 208 and 2019?

[Fatemah]

Hello bednobs, I have already saved this in my computer and I didn't notice that I have made a mistake with date. I will correct them and thanks for letting me know.

[Old_Geezer]

Yes, the dates. Found nothing else that wasn't subjective preference, so not worth mentioning. You may wish to check that there is a space after every comma though. Otherwise fine as far as I can tell.

[chelle7272]

Hi fatemah, glad you are doing well. I didn't want o edit your document directly, so I have put some suggestions for the Project section at the bottom of the document. Good luck.

[Canary42]

Overall it’s fine, your English is impressive. Most of my amendments are minor.

I found one or two of your adjectives uncomfortable, and would suggest the following changes :-

deep knowledge . . . outstanding advice --> extensive knowledge ... excellent advice

truly blessed --> fortunate

opportunity and worked ---> opportunity to work (then change learned to learn)



A trifling point, but where you say “sell and promote”, I would say “promote and sell”

“Keeping an eye over” is a cross-mix of two possibilities -–> you should say either “keeping an eye on” or “casting an eye over”

Good luck.

[Fatemah]

Thank you so much everybody. It helps me a lot.

[Bazile]

'Couldn't find any Google accounts '

I get the above message when I try to open the link