Scotchlie is wrong about the FOI act in a couple of areas.
Firstly, subject organisations must reply within 20 *working* days after reciept of the request, not '21 days'.
Under FOI, the subject organisation is not allowed to take any account of who is requesting the information, nor why they are making the enquiry. Unless it helps to frame your request more clearly don't bother saying why you want the info. They don't care.
There's no point copying in your MP or Councillor at this stage. They will only be entitled to the same information you are and will not care that an individual is requesting something under FOI. They might care about a complaint, but not an FOI request.
Although it's tempting, and perfectly allowed, do not be tempted to aggregate your FOI with a complaint as this may (it shouldn't, but in practice it often does) lead to delays.
If the subject authority fails to provide the information which you are seeking, you need to go through their internal complaints procedure. Once this is exhausted, you would be able to go to the Information Commissioner with your complaint.
There's very little point addressing any such request to the CE, since the CE won't be the one answering it and won't particularly give two hoots that you've lodged an FOI request. Look on the website of the relevant authority and find out the direct address of the FOI team instead.
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