song writing

[SLINKYKATE]

if i write the fist line of a song can you help me out with the next lines

'can you feel the surrounding air'

[SLINKYKATE]

can you feel the the surrounding air
blowing on your skin so fair
feel the warmth of the sun on your skin
gives me a glowing feeling from within

can you hear the rain on your window pane
??????????????

[squarebear]

Beating like my heart again.

[no-knowledge]

you want to hope James Blunt does not spot this thread, he will pinch this piece of garbage for his next cr@ppy song.

[no-knowledge]

Did I disappoint you or let you down?
Should I be feeling guilty or let the judges frown?
can you feel the the surrounding air
blowing on your skin so fair
feel the warmth of the sun on your skin
gives me a glowing feeling from within

can you hear the rain on your window pane
'Cause I saw the end before we'd begun,
Yes I saw you were blinded and I knew I had won.
So I took what's mine by eternal right.

[no-knowledge]

Goodbye my lover.
Goodbye my friend.
You have been the one.
You have been the one for me.

[Joy11]

fao. RufusDufus, I totally agree with you and have to say lynsy's not a happy bunny today!!!
Oh, look, could this be the start of another song....lol

[jackthehat]

Sorry if I sound in any way school-marmish but lynsey claims to be 14 (or she might have had her birthday by now, I'm not sure) which accounts for the hiccup in her humour..............

No doubt she'll tell me to sling my hook again............

http://www.theanswerbank.co.uk/Media-and-TV/Fi lm/Question730475.html

[Joy11]

I can sense your'e bothered...not! jack, I have had a good chuckle though, she's gone for me big time in media and tv, Bess her! I now can see her age thing, her spelling leaves quite a lot to be desired, if she is 14, I would like to think her attitude isn't the norm....no, there are some brilliant young people out there!

[Joy11]

apoligies Slinky for interjecting something else into your very good post

[SLINKYKATE]

james blunt and the killers wont ask me to be there lyricist again if we dont get crackin' so far we have two verses
2nd.verse
can you hear the rain on your window pane
beating like my heart again
if i could touch your soul with love

??????????????

[B00]

i dont understand the rules here either.....basically do we supply the next couple of lines, which you disregard and throw your own in instead?

[SLINKYKATE]

yes boo,got it in one

[SLINKYKATE]

sorry boo, you supply the next line(for fun only)