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Help my poem. Be merciless....
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I've been at this for a certain amount of time. If anyone can make any adjustments in a positive sense that would be nice. I know that from line 6 it's iffy. That's where you come in. Or before line 6 should the need arise.
I dreamed one day that I'd have you,
I wished my dream,
It would come true.
I wished a dream, it came true.
My dream was you, my wish was you.
I then forgot, what was once a dream
It then became my life,
I've got dreams and wishes anew
How did I make that wish?
How did it come true?
I've got other wishes.
Do they mean as much as you?
A wish come true,
Happens
A dream,
May.
I dreamed one day that I'd have you,
I wished my dream,
It would come true.
I wished a dream, it came true.
My dream was you, my wish was you.
I then forgot, what was once a dream
It then became my life,
I've got dreams and wishes anew
How did I make that wish?
How did it come true?
I've got other wishes.
Do they mean as much as you?
A wish come true,
Happens
A dream,
May.
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For more on marking an answer as the "Best Answer", please visit our FAQ.I dreamed one night that I'd have you
And then one day my dream came true
The dream I'd dreamt (that wish) came true
My dream was you, my wish was you
The dream forgotten,life became
An altogether different game
How did that dream become a fact
Now that we're two let's make a pact
Let's dream together you and me
That our life will always be
As good a dream as we can make
To find life's smoothest paths to take.♥
And then one day my dream came true
The dream I'd dreamt (that wish) came true
My dream was you, my wish was you
The dream forgotten,life became
An altogether different game
How did that dream become a fact
Now that we're two let's make a pact
Let's dream together you and me
That our life will always be
As good a dream as we can make
To find life's smoothest paths to take.♥
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