this song i wrote i need advice again lol!

lauratwentyeight | 20:17 Mon 26th Mar 2012 | Music

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i know im a pain in the arse lol! is this to repetitive like unbearable? i can only play so much so im limited and this is all ive got lol! god bless you if u can help lol thanks lol ;))

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDpnTiAFBNc

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EvianBaby

I felt like it was building up to something that didn't come. Like a big chorus. Sorry if that doesn't sound very nice. You have a Lovely voice.

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evian baby, thanks alot yeah its basically 2 verses a bridge and an outro lol! thats all i had lol, thankyou very much for your geedback thats how i learn lol ;))) x

tenrec

Agree with Evian. Good luck.

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