Sorry, no - you need to control your breathing and think about the words you're singing , not just do it line by line. You're off key as well - but that might improved by singing with a backing track. Don't try and sing the backing singers' bits as well! It's a great song but not the easiest to start with.
Cowboy, you have posted 3 threads with different tracks, but all with the same title - next time, please change the title on new questions, otherwise it gets very confusing!