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Honest feedback most welcome.
A new heroine in town:
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For more on marking an answer as the "Best Answer", please visit our FAQ.Very good - just one quibble, the shadow of the girls legs (I presume that's what it is) indicates strong back-lighting but there is no shadow from the villains head. Also the length of the shadow indicates a low light source, which we would surely see from the perspective you've drawn it.
I just wish I could draw half as well (even one tenth as well).
I just wish I could draw half as well (even one tenth as well).
I would echo the suggestions regarding the shadows. The heroine seems to have a large wall behind her which would block any light that cast such a long shadow in the direction you have drawn it. Also the perspective of the persons legs on the floor seem to be a bit off.
Apart from that it's a very good piece of work. I love the vibrancy of the colours and the shading is good. You should consider posting your artwork on DeviantArt. http:// www.dev iantart .com/
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
Apart from that it's a very good piece of work. I love the vibrancy of the colours and the shading is good. You should consider posting your artwork on DeviantArt. http://
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
Well done! I've seen a lot worse - and it's certainly good enough for publication. Your chosen view of the prone victim involving foreshortening is one of the hardest poses to draw well, and I wonder a bit about the legs. If one draws exactly what they see of a model posed in this position, the result comes out looking lumpy and a bit shapeless. The skill lies in exaggerating the perspective just enough to make the drawing look correct. (Too much, and they'll seem 10 feet tall). When Salvador Dali's detractors claimed that he couldn't draw, he deliberately chose a foreshortened figure for the subject of his 'Christ on the Cross'. The result silenced his critics!
I was late in coming across two books by Burne Hogarth, (he who drew the Tarzan comic strips, and also taught at New York School of Art). 'Dynamic Figure Drawing' and 'Dynamic Anatomy' made a big difference to my approach to figure drawing. I'd recommend them to anyone, be they student or graduate. Good Luck!
I was late in coming across two books by Burne Hogarth, (he who drew the Tarzan comic strips, and also taught at New York School of Art). 'Dynamic Figure Drawing' and 'Dynamic Anatomy' made a big difference to my approach to figure drawing. I'd recommend them to anyone, be they student or graduate. Good Luck!
Not my cup of tea but I do draw and sell.....
my comments are yes, a very good stab, no pun intended,
look at rounding the non-cuffed wrist of the guy on the ground a little - it's too flat.
the shadows of the two men and the woman as mentioned
a bit more "villain" as sandy said
you don't need the shoe box on top of the left building - simplify that out as it would give more focus to what is happening on the street.
good luck!
my comments are yes, a very good stab, no pun intended,
look at rounding the non-cuffed wrist of the guy on the ground a little - it's too flat.
the shadows of the two men and the woman as mentioned
a bit more "villain" as sandy said
you don't need the shoe box on top of the left building - simplify that out as it would give more focus to what is happening on the street.
good luck!
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