Mini Boo's Poem

[B00]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2dri6o1.jpg

And it reads...

Once upon a breadstick, a few crumbles ago, I fell into a hole and then shouted no, then a dog saved me from that hole. Jelly Been, sooo, I used my sandwich and said "have this" but the dog said "no" and the dog showed me Facebook and I said "woah, that's cool! and the dog said "ho" and I said "what's up?" and the dog said before you go, you must have this jelly been

Spike Milligan, eat your heart out!

[rockyracoon]

Lol, that's good, I like it.

Good luck with the competition :)

[B00]

lol ta grasscarp xxx im ridiculously proud of it, and see potential in her, but then again I would wouldn't I? LOL

[wolf63]

It is such a shame that most kids lose their great imaginations when they grow up.

Good luck to mini B00 x

[tiggerblue10]

That's great B00 and well done Mini B00 :o) x

[B00]

Heh, ta.

I'm under no illusions that she could win it, so not told her, but It's worth a shot :-)

[wolf63]

You have got to be innit to winnit

[EcclesCake]

That is completely bonkers and brilliant!

[murraymints]

Sooooo good!

[Octavius]

A talking dog that calls her ho?

Just kidding, brilliant stuff.

I suppose it sounds a little corny, but I would turn it into art using different funky fonts and colours with some images (clip art & hand drawn) here and there and frame it - easy to help her do it on a pc. I did something simlar for my daughter and made it glass backed to keep the original hand written version on the reverse side.

Its a little difficult to explain what I mean, she is working on something similar for her nan, maybe I could post it as a picture...

[B00]

I did think "OH!" when I saw that myself Octavius, but she meant "yo" and that makes sense considering the next line.

We are in the process of making a giant collage of some of her artwork, so we've asked her to rewrite it and put pictures round it to illustrate to join the collection.

[murraymints]

At 11 I had this published in a book of poetry by kids..written in the first wee of secondary

I do not like geography
History is bore
Geometry and physics
I can't take anymore
homecraft with its cooking
Music with its song
Even though I hat all these
This is just where I belong

And I got £20 !

[Octavius]

Wow, £20. Is that like £1,000 in todays money?


:)

[B00]

Ahhh, that's sweet MM :-)

[marval]

Well done Mini Boo, a very clever poem.

[murraymints]

It tells you yes
It tells you no
It tells you when you just don't know
So ask an hear
That's all it takes
A difference...huge huge it makes !



Gawd I'm a poet !

[wolf63]

murray - is your middle name Topaz?