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What Do You Think Of My Short Story?
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Ok so I've wrote a short story and would like to know what you guys think.
I do struggle with literacy due to learning difficulties and use writing as practise and as a hobby. So yeah could you take a look please and tell me what you think.
http:// www.quo tev.com /story/ 4753201 /Baby.. .
I do struggle with literacy due to learning difficulties and use writing as practise and as a hobby. So yeah could you take a look please and tell me what you think.
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For more on marking an answer as the "Best Answer", please visit our FAQ.I think there is an interesting tale her but whilst I sympathise with the literacy difficulties you have I think you need to use a spellchecker (it would have picked up INGERIES and TROUBBLE, for example) and get someone to make the main changes to words (TIME not DOWN), punctuation and grammar before you post more widely.
But based on the first few paragraphs it does sound okay when read aloud. I'll look more closely after the football.
But based on the first few paragraphs it does sound okay when read aloud. I'll look more closely after the football.