Could You Correct The Mistakes In This English Paragraph?

[lenanils]

If you want me to come over your place, it should mean it. Don't say tomorrow " No, you can't come over". Usually you say in the morning "You can visit me in my place next week" and evening you say "No you can't come over' again you say next day that I can come over, after few hours you say I can't !Please think before you give any offer.

[scorpiojo]

Don't keep asking me to come over to your place and then change your mind.

[Old_Geezer]

yes

[2sp_]

Only invite me over when, and if, you actually mean it.

[oldbillbuck]

Brings to mind the Cliff Richard record from 1960, "Please don't tease"