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improvement ideas

how can i improve this and any ideas for improving my writing in general? In the dark I could make out the faint outline of the town, it seemed a million miles from here. A few friendly lights still...
21:19 Wed 19th Nov 20082 answers, last by P.Turnbuckle 00:09 Mon 24th Nov 2008

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