Who Can Me Write The Poem?

[Pialanla]

Who can me write the poem? Is there anyone can help me write the poem?

[andy-hughes]

Hi Pialania,

I think my fellow posters misunderstood your original question, and thought you were asking for some simple examples.

Am i right in thinking that English is not your first langauge?

If you want to write a rhyming poem, start with a line you like, and think of a word to rhyme with it -

It was one evening late in June - rhyme word is 'moon'.

Then write a second line to go with it -

I stood with you looking up at the moon.

Then read the two lines out loud to see if they have the same rhythm, and simply carry on from there.

This will encourage you to explore your vocabulary, and assist you in speaking with the correct rhythms and spaces.

Hope this helps.

[Pialanla]

I'm sorry for misunderstood. In my post, I just want to see some simple examples for improve my writing and English is not my first language. Maybe make everyone misunderstood me. Thank you very much for Andy-hughes that you advise me for writing and I will take your advice to improve in my poem. This first time for writing the poem. I feel it's difficult but I will try. Fighting! ^__^

[brionon]

Graham-W. Great mate.

[brionon]

Graham-W. I nicked your verse and put it on facebook. !!Sorry !