Mini Boo's Poem

[B00]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2dri6o1.jpg

And it reads...

Once upon a breadstick, a few crumbles ago, I fell into a hole and then shouted no, then a dog saved me from that hole. Jelly Been, sooo, I used my sandwich and said "have this" but the dog said "no" and the dog showed me Facebook and I said "woah, that's cool! and the dog said "ho" and I said "what's up?" and the dog said before you go, you must have this jelly been

Spike Milligan, eat your heart out!

[rowanwitch]

Weird and wonderful the imagination of small children

[Purple_Popple]

Awwwwwwwwwwww! :)

[Psybbo]

Aw, lovely

[flump1]

Awwwww bless her !! A literary genius in the making.

[B00]

When I read the first line, about the breadstick and the crumbles, I kill myself laughing!

[tonyav]

LOL, lovely imagination.

[boxtops]

Edward Lear, watch out.... :-)

[ummmm]

That is super cute and brilliant for her age.

[B00]

Lol, thanks for indulging me :-)

The poem's mental isnt it? And for any pedants, she's 8 so 'scuse the typos :P

[DTCwordfan]

Keep her writing, Boo.....there's a few around here that could do with a dosage of imagination in their lives.

[sherrardk]

Bless her, that's really good and shows a really good imagination.

[tonyav]

LOL, what typo's B00.

[gness]

Ooooo...I loved it when one with an imagination like that turned up in a class....Once upon a breadstick, a few crumbles ago...is just super! x

[vodkancoke]

Awwww love it! Well done Mini B00! Xx

[woofgang]

love it!

[Jeza]

Boo, I know nowt but that is brill. Your 8 year old will go far.

[society]

Awww so cute, love it! She's just brilliant.

Like mother, I see Mini Boo does not fail for words. :)

[wolf63]

What about this competition

The Book People - child's written work in print (age 7-17yrs) - 30 Jul - Kids & Games
Is your child a budding writer, poet, or journalist? If so, we have a brilliant opportunity to get their work in print!


We want aspiring young writers from around the country to enter the 2013 Red House Young Writers’ Yearbook competition and win the chance to see their stories or poems published in a beautiful book.
The winners will also be invited to a writing workshop, hosted by a children’s author, at The Imagine Children’s Festival in February 2014.

To enter the competition, your child should be aged between 7 and 17. They can submit a story, poem or article and it’s up to the individual what subject they choose to write about. This year the competition entries will be divided into four age categories: 7+, 9+, 11+ and 13+.

Entries must be under 1000 words.

http://www.thebookpeople.co.uk/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/qs_content1_tbp?storeId=10001&catalogId=10051&langId=100&title=&spotName=wl_competition_RH_Young%20Writers%202013

[B00]

That's brilliant wolfy, I've entered her poem- no harm in trying is there? Thanks for pointing it out :-)

[grasscarp]

What she has written is very good indeed. No make that awesome!