Help In English Urgent

[FatemaAhmed]

Hi, I need little help regarding English, actually, my professor failed me in my course and I am a little worried why he did this because I was present in all classes. I want to write him an email and want to know the reason.

Please can someone proofread this email, I have uploaded that in google docs, and here I'm sharing its link Thanks in Advance

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qS-UcTDFKPWlYIUhb5iFKT9px9j1nvQsHF4YoGrUOWA/edit?usp=sharing

[bednobs]

sounds fine to me - not quited perfect English but I would expect that an egytian student in a german uni would be expected to be word-perfect. The meaning is clear. Was passing predicated on just attendance then? No work?

[davebro]

Er - sorry to be blunt but being present in classes doesn't mean you learnt anything! Were there exams? How did you score in them, or on coursework?

[Prudie]

Not meaning to be rude but genuinely interested, you have been asking how to word emails in English on this site for quite a long time, is that all you ever have to practice, writing emails?

[JimF]

Dear Professor XXXXX,

I hope you are doing well. I have received my course status and I’m quite upset to know I have failed.

I’m a little confused about this as I was present in all but two of the classes, plus two where my internet connection was not working properly.

I would be grateful if you could clarify that I have failed the course and, if so, the reason.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Regards,

[JimF]

However, as others have said, it's highly unlikely that mere attendance of the classes was the criterion for pass or failure. Did you have no coursework? Was there not an end-of-course exam?

[FatemaAhmed]

We take 3 credit points for attendance and three credit points if we're going to appear in his exam.
and I was attending his all classes and we are allowed to skip 3 three classes and then the exam is optional.
So I was expecting three credit points for attendance but he even not gave me my attendance points and failed me.

[Jackdaw33]

The exam is optional?

[FatemaAhmed]

No even there was no course ending work.
Just we have to submit his proposal if we are taking his exams, but I am not going to appear in his exams so that's why I did not submit the proposal.

[JimF]

This is almost impossible to believe or even take seriously. Is this one of the fake colleges which people use to get a study visa?

[jno]

it doesn't matter what Fatema's situation is.

JimF's suggested letter reads well.

[bednobs]

how many classes were there altogether. It sounds like you didn't go to 4 of them, and maybe that is why you didn't get attendance points. A semester in uk is 10 weeks. If it's the same in germany, you have missed nearly half the classes