Here Is A Poem I Wrote, Do You Like It?

[inamuddle1]

Neutron particals of lilac light person,
Scandalous energy,
Enchanted city,
engraved and critical kaleidoscope salvation
for a revolution of rhymes and medleys of discrimination.
Gravity,
proof
chamber of chaos
Orchestra orb
oracle origin.
A children's story and a day in the life.
A dream,
A forest,
a thousand nights.
Addictive acknowledgement with presence of mind,
a gift of natures navigators
Afternoon coffee bugs
Air locked ceremony of the sun.
Jade jewel of shimmering realm melodies
celebration,
sway,
crack open a bottle
de-javu,
Indian indigo summer.
The root of light,
sun, star, moon, initiate.
Fresh fruit distribution.
The future light of Neutron particals of lilac light,
The future calls the dawn.
Galaxy to Galaxy,
flying saucers sorcerer,
with a joystick for navigation,
bringing us back to decriminalisation.
Self modification with no complication,
Drop me of at NASA Station.

[Barmaid]

Inamuddle, your question thread was entitled "Here is a poem I wrote, do you like it?". Some said yes, some said no and some gave constructive criticism.

IF you are looking for a career as an author, you have to be prepared for far worse than anything ABers can dish out.

Just because some people answered in the negative, it does not make them bullies.

Finally, perhaps your question should have been "Here is a poem I wrote, please only post if you like it".

[NoMercy]

Take no notice of those who have nothing constructive to say.

[Quizmonkey]

No-one is bullying. I'm a professional writer. You can't write. Stringing a load of meaningless unconnected phrases together is not writing. Or poetry. It is mindless. And you are delusional. Vanity publishing is your only route to seeing any of your 'work' in print.