Here Is A Poem I Wrote, Do You Like It?

[inamuddle1]

Neutron particals of lilac light person,
Scandalous energy,
Enchanted city,
engraved and critical kaleidoscope salvation
for a revolution of rhymes and medleys of discrimination.
Gravity,
proof
chamber of chaos
Orchestra orb
oracle origin.
A children's story and a day in the life.
A dream,
A forest,
a thousand nights.
Addictive acknowledgement with presence of mind,
a gift of natures navigators
Afternoon coffee bugs
Air locked ceremony of the sun.
Jade jewel of shimmering realm melodies
celebration,
sway,
crack open a bottle
de-javu,
Indian indigo summer.
The root of light,
sun, star, moon, initiate.
Fresh fruit distribution.
The future light of Neutron particals of lilac light,
The future calls the dawn.
Galaxy to Galaxy,
flying saucers sorcerer,
with a joystick for navigation,
bringing us back to decriminalisation.
Self modification with no complication,
Drop me of at NASA Station.

[inamuddle1]

98 comments of horribleness. Good bye!

[DTCwordfan]

can we bring on a potentate?

[AlwaysConfused]

I think you should've said 'Go away. See if you can dream of pink bunnies TODAY'. See, I knew I had the poet in me :D

[Tilly2]

Goodbye to you. Your numeracy is as good as your literacy.

[DTCwordfan]

Oh dear:

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[grasscarp]

inamuddle. There was not all horribleness. You invited comments. What do you want. People could have ignored you, but they didnt they read everything you posted. and commented honestly.

[inamuddle1]

some people were very rude and not constructive. That is all. It's nice to be nice. I wouldnt want to name any names, just read the threads! I came here with good intentions.

[evedawn]

Oooppps I actually DO LIKE it!

[inamuddle1]

purple popple on you hobble - now i am being rude :D And i dont care hahaha get it up ya!!!!!

[inamuddle1]

I mean what is this, WeHatePoetry.What The Funicular

[Purple_Popple]

Whatever....lol...

[gness]

I think the wrong posts were removed.

[EcclesCake]

If you want to publish your work you need to grow a pair! The comments you have received have not, in the most part, been unpleasant they're just honest opinions.

[Mick-Talbot]

I think you are all rude.............having a brawl whilst I'm not here

I ask you!

[Boto]

Rubbish.

[magsmay]

@Tilly ' oh how incredibly rude of you !!!! '............;-))

[inamuddle1]

What a bunch of bullies lol...