Here Is A Poem I Wrote, Do You Like It?

inamuddle1 | 18:13 Sun 24th Feb 2013 | Arts & Literature

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Neutron particals of lilac light person,
Scandalous energy,
Enchanted city,
engraved and critical kaleidoscope salvation
for a revolution of rhymes and medleys of discrimination.
Gravity,
proof
chamber of chaos
Orchestra orb
oracle origin.
A children's story and a day in the life.
A dream,
A forest,
a thousand nights.
Addictive acknowledgement with presence of mind,
a gift of natures navigators
Afternoon coffee bugs
Air locked ceremony of the sun.
Jade jewel of shimmering realm melodies
celebration,
sway,
crack open a bottle
de-javu,
Indian indigo summer.
The root of light,
sun, star, moon, initiate.
Fresh fruit distribution.
The future light of Neutron particals of lilac light,
The future calls the dawn.
Galaxy to Galaxy,
flying saucers sorcerer,
with a joystick for navigation,
bringing us back to decriminalisation.
Self modification with no complication,
Drop me of at NASA Station.

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doctordb

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No worries, here's some (post production). INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY A solid punch from sonny's fist slams into savvas' swollen and bloodied face. Save as is tied to a chair in his own home. Charlie sits at a desk in the corner searching a computer. Sonny lands another vicious blow. SONNY where? No response so sonny hits out again. SONNY (CONT'D) Tell me and it's...

18:59 Sun 24th Feb 2013

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RATTER15

My head hurts now!!!

doctordb

Why not relax by reading some poetry ratter? :)

inamuddle1

Question Author

Mine too :( All my friends love my writing...

DTCwordfan

Now that is best answer........

DTCwordfan

dr b's that is.....

B00

Now see! Iknew there was a reason why I didn't like poetry!

inamuddle1

Question Author

I feel like i've just done an episode of X Factor and got booooo'd off the stage lol... Ah well. Peace n love

Sparkles62

Your poem don't rhyme,
But neither does mine.
Oops yes it does,
I'm really a wuss.
Why anyone would want to list
en to poems like yours
unless they were slightly inebriated
is beyond me.

Way over my head. X

inamuddle1

Question Author

Tonight I will dance through the forest of dreams,
like a fairy with twinkle toes,
and I can go anywhere just by twitching my noes.
I will sit on the mushrooms,
and feed the little pink bunnies,
because it's my dream,
the bunnies can be pink if i want them to be.